Indentations
The wind is your eyesthat glimpsehorizonssee past all indentationsof my feeble personalitytell in screamsin my sullen earsso deeplyI hear in cadencelike first rowseated at the symphonyand all I hear...
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Such creative and artistic poetry written by a very talented author. A joy to read and to have it posted here on AspPs. Thanks Al! Leslie{Mr}. AKA Screaming Eagle. Aspiringpoets site.HitAngels site.
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I love the array of sights & sounds you packed into this, and the intriguing format. Your talent is showing...
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*lost* I don't get it... Someone explain.. please? BTW... aag's poem is still archived in my forum.. *laughs**eyes filled with insanity he leaves*----------------------------"No more shall I walk the...
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Blackmane,I can only make an attempt to explain my interpretation of this work. What speaks loudly to me is the way life impacts a person.....Experiences have a way of shaping us through their...
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Beautiful piece, Al. So many sounds and images come flying from this poem, it's a true treat for the reader. I love the title, by the way. Powerful writing, friend. Excellent!~Jules~
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Ahhh... Thanks. *eyes filled with insanity he leaves*----------------------------"No more shall I walk the world alone. For They who join with their Sadness, Enter into Madness Eternal."-Kheldar...
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AGS:Like Blackmane, I was probably looking for some thread to make it easy to understand. Annette's response helped a lot.But as I read it again & again, I felt the musical complexity come...
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Hello Al,I enjoyed this poem very much. There's so much here to imagine, it's very deep.Great work Al ! Tais
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